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June 7, 2010
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Make
SONY
Model
DSLR-A200
Shutter Speed
1/320 second
Aperture
F/6.3
Focal Length
200 mm
ISO Speed
320
Date Taken
Jun 6, 2010, 1:22:09 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows

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:Little things: by Ailedda :Little things: by Ailedda
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:iconbwozniakphotography:
I saw this photograph and as soon as you became a member of our group I wanted to critique some of your work. I think that most of your work is FANTASTIC, however this one is one of the weaker ones. I just think that the picture is slightly dark and flat, the light is also flat and lacks contrast. I like the composition, the bokeh and the sharpness that you have caught here. I like the idea behind the photo, however it is not very original, as there are hundreds of pictures of flowers. Also the dots (which you can tell that they were added in Photoshop :)) are slightly distracting and don't look natural at all.

Try brightening it up a little bit, adding slightly more contrast, removing the dots and next time try a more dynamic, fresh angle or perspective.

The image is really good overall, and it would look really nice on a print. I just think that some parts could be improved.

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:iconmyname93:
myname93 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
j'aime
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:iconailedda:
Ailedda Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you! :)
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:iconmyname93:
myname93 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
:) :)
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:iconafishinthesea:
afishinthesea Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010
wonderful
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:iconailedda:
Ailedda Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you :D
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Lena-The-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
This is beautiful. So pretty :) Great shot!
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:iconailedda:
Ailedda Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much! :)
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Lena-The-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
No problem :) :hug:
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hawkeye1 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010
nice, very tranquil image.
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:iconailedda:
Ailedda Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you very much :)
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